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Another snippet from Rhythm, Smoke, Inc. 3:
“Make yourself at home.” Apparently her sarcasm was lost on him because he just grinned and kept on wiping down the cupboard.
Marty wasn’t cute, or handsome in a conventional way. He was big, but more than just being size extra-extra-large, his personality filled the room even when he kept his mouth shut.
His gaze lingered on her chest and without looking down, Holly knew her nipples were tenting the thin material of her tee.
“How you feeling?” His smile became down right wolfish.
Oh for God ’s sake. “Did you come to check on my health or fool around?”
“Is option two on the table?” he growled.
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She’s gonna have to give it to him straight or she’ll get nowhere. Great tease, Gem.
Love the description of Marty (and the picture of the cat)!
LOL Love his last line. A fun snippet! 🙂
Haha! He’s trying. Fantastic snippet. Their chemistry is already stating to sizzle. 🙂
Love his comeback … great!
Sending you some sun from this end of the world 🙂
Thank you for the sun, Iris. I’m in dire need here where it’s another GLOOMY day.
Sharp repartee, Gem. Excellent dynamics. Sending some African sun 🙂
You are a wonder. I gobble up your words like a hungry child. You bring the reader right into the scene as a happy observer.
Thanks, Charmaine. I gobble up your words like a hungry child, as well. 😀
Well of course he’s going to want to know about Option Two LOL. Great snippet!
What a tease! Great description of him. Grrrrowl!
I love that last line. 🙂 Great snippet.
He’s fast worker! And the table is primed.
LOL!
She left herself wide open for that one. Can’t wait for her response!
It occurs to me that if fooling around hadn’t been on her mind, she probably wouldn’t have mentioned it –and her nipples confirm that hypothesis.
So, was her word choice unfortunate, or deliberate?
Cute! Great description of him. Super repartee.
Saucy. I like it. 😉
She should say yes, just to see what he says. Great snippet. 🙂 🙂
I wonder why she mentioned option 2? Unless that’s where her mind had gone as well. I guess the nipples don’t lie! Great snippet as always, Gem!